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Catastrophe:
When the world sleeps.
We have those.
Who play out a game.
To enjoy the fame.
That take in.
The fire within.
Though, God can see.
Through thick and thin.
What we all do.
Good and bad.
We reach out a hand.
And try to grab.
The ones we love.
Yet others have come.
To make us numb.
Stand strong and tall.
They will fall.
Because when the world wakes.
I will be next to you.
In all that's to be.
Even a Catastrophe.
When the world sleeps.
We have those.
Who play out a game.
To enjoy the fame.
That take in.
The fire within.
Though, God can see.
Through thick and thin.
What we all do.
Good and bad.
We reach out a hand.
And try to grab.
The ones we love.
Yet others have come.
To make us numb.
Stand strong and tall.
They will fall.
Because when the world wakes.
I will be next to you.
In all that's to be.
Even a Catastrophe.
Poem: Catastrophe: Written by: Kevin M. Sies (EternalFlame1891)
© 2013 - 2024 EternalFlame1891
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I really like it. But I thought that having a sentence after every phrase made it too choppy and somewhat confusing. When I read it as if there wasn't a period after every line it sounded much smoother and elegant. I'm not sure if you meant it to sound choppy or not, but the poem itself...the words sound like they are meant, when read, to be smooth and elegant. Other than that it was really good.