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Love So Far Away:

It seems like the best things in life.
Are so far from reach.
Though, a little patience can teach.
That they will come.
All your dreams above.
Making them true at last.
And when they pass.
You'll always know.
The love that you felt.
Being distant from you.
Was the greatest it could be.
As I am always there with you.
We will find a way.
Love so far away.
Poem: Love So Far Away: Written by: Kevin M. Sies (EternalFlame1891)
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LonerArts Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student Writer
These are perfect words i need to hear right now.
Only if my love was like this poem everything would be perfect.
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EternalFlame1891 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
Everyone's love is out there and is perfection. You just simply have to believe. I am glad you found some hope within my writing.
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LonerArts Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Student Writer
:) thank u. :)
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TomRedlion Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Reminds me of a Dire Straits song.
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EternalFlame1891 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
MK rocks!!!
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TomRedlion Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Indeed.
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Me2Smart4U Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
this is well written indeed. The emotions within are strong and has a very deep and unique flow..
I truly enjoyed reading :boogie:
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EternalFlame1891 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
Thanks a bunch!
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Me2Smart4U Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
most welcome :hug:
maybe if you have the time check out my Word Bank contest --->[link]
I thought it would be a fun way to get some inspiration pumping.
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EternalFlame1891 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
I appreciate it!
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